Good, but the melody seems a little out of timing sort of thing, and if you replaced the main sound with something with more of a reverb it would sound a lot nicer.
Anyway, pretty nice work, had some catchy stuff in there, keep it up.
MmMm sweet. My only complaint is that numerous note part sounding so mashed. It needs some space or something, it sounds nasty. The kick is dead on and that 32nd note stuff is always cool to listen too.
Unfortunatly, it's a bit short....But SWEET!
here are some tips
try making it longer, some different tunes, and some sharper notes
Well, as soon as I get FL back I will. Got a question for you though. What do you mean by 'sharper notes'?
This is just the first thing I've ever decided to submit. I have other things out there that I made and now that the Audio mods are finishing 'himhawing' around I might actually get a chance to put more stuff up there.