Pretty great stuff, both the guitarplay and vocals. I don't know much spanish, but I unserstood some of it, heh. The only thing to complain about here is the crappy sound quality, it's very sharp and at the same time low and not very clear. If you could use a better mic or something, this would sounds pretty amazing, keep up the great work!
You just recorded this man, Cmon, you can do better than this! Try making the song on your own, though, I think you were just trying to be funny.
man i worked hard on that ,
what's the exact problem , the language ?
the riff order , the vocals ???
i was original , and followed my instincts man , what you suggest ?