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ooo... I pulled you up by 0.47 pts on your rating, lol Anyways, the beginning is.... mysterious and dark, yes, but very dank, not that interesting. As Wisk said, shorten it. When it begins in the middle, I'm beginning to get interested, not that bad. It still seems mysterious and dark, so your keeping " type " together, that's good. Okay, it's getting better when it reaches 3 minutes, yes! Now I'm interested, so I'm listening and I reach the end..... It's COOL!! XD I like your work, man. Let's see if you do good job or more, lol
10 out of 10 " I took my time. "