It was okay.
I'll be honest, when I first heard your voice, I LOL'ed. Still, it's ok.
I'm gonna go listen to your final version.
lol yeah im not a singer, i only try to sing ^^ its gotten better but still needs to be recorded
Your voice needs a little work and you could pad out the instrumental a little more. Work on it and submit it again and you might have something.
Hope everything goes alright with your gramps!
thanks for the review man, i'll probably have a new one up tomorrow or this weekend
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.