Nice tune. Kinda...
It's a lovely song. I liked the beat a lot, but it really fell apart at 2:18. The guitar was really lacking, the lyrics and the harmony needed some work. It has potential, and if it was fixed up I would love to use it in a movie. Good luck and I hope to hear more of these acoustic pieces from you.
thanks for your feedback, Blizznet! yes, after listening to it again at 2:18, i guess it does need some work. i will definetly improve it when i can!
I like it!!!
Great job turning your demo into a song. You're showing many different styles of music through your songs, and starting to master them. Keep up the good work. I'd like to see the lyrics to this song. Why don't you email them to me.
hey, thanks again for the review! ill show you the lyrics, as soon as i get a chance to. thank you again!
I really liked it, Although the vocals sounded too electronic for me, Good work nonetheless.
Thanks! Yeah, probably the FX i used on my voice. See, my mixer runs thru an amp, and the amp kinda distorts the quality, and it sounded fine through the amp. I may fix the vocals' EQ. Thanks again!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.