Notbad

So this was notbad here I like this kind of sound seems like it was missing something though I think if you made this longer it would be fine adding some backdrop effects might help too it's a beautiful piece of track here just needs more depth and of course something extra but regardless it's still pretty good to listen to on it's own too so nice job on this one here make more of this later

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer and more backdrop sounds

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Okay

Well the sound to this is very good, very easy to listen too and there is plenty going on in this, so that's nice to hear. The one major problem with this is it doesn't loop all that well, so the ending to this could do with some work doing to it. Otherwise though, it would make a very decent loop if you could just fix the ending part up, so pretty decent work.

2/5

<3

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Sweet

Really nice sounding song, even though the chprds you use don't even sound that great, when you put them together it really works. Only issue really is the fact that loop doesn't actually loop. But it's still quite good.

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well..

Doesn't seem like too much work was put into this- are those your loops in the background or did you make them yourself? I'll assume you made them. (but if its just you improvising over the loops then it should only take you 1 day and certainly no more than 1 hour :D) The bass groove works real well, the drums have a good flow and are suitable for the bluesy style here. Guitar composition is alright, it has a cheery blues sound, maybe a bit simple, but the chords progression is utilized quite well, and I like your sliding while transitioning. Just let your last note ring out, and loop the instruments in the background one more time-this would make this loop, loop a whole lot more flowingly.

Another cool thing you could do is put some quieter, lower rhythm guitar in the background. and maybe extend this and have a type of guitar duel in some portion of this track. some drum variation would be nice too- and maybe some open hi hats or tambourines would be great for a chorus section.

and you're guitar tone is pretty crappy :P, but cheaper (for a lack of a better word) tones are more suitable for blues pieces. it might just be due to a cheap guitar, but it could be better mixed with the background loop. just maybe a touch of reverb and chorus would do the trick if you have access to them (or you use a plugin to generate them). the distortion isn't too bad for this type of sound- but you may want to experience with cleaner amplifications and see how it sounds. Oh, and try raising the bass, mids, and treble just a bit to see if it may give you a better sound.

Not bad for a first submission, not bad but not great guitar playing either. Keep rocking man! sorry if i was too harsh, hope this review will help you improve.

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Reminds me of

the game on newgrounds: Fancy Pants Adventure. It has a nice fun feel to it. Great loop, and great for your first. Welcome to the AP, this is very enjoyable, would probably work really well in a funky game. Great work.

10/10 and a 5/5 for encouragement.

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