This is a cool idea, I can see what you're going for on this one. I think with some work you could definitely turn this into a full on banger. Those drums should hit alot a harder in alot of those spots to bring the energy up a bit. Not a bad sound overall, just need to fine-tune it a bit.
What are you using for your drum sounds? The default FL Studio presets or a 3rd party vst? I'm partial for Get Good Drums, but there's alot of good ones out there.