For the record...
I'll admit you're just catching my frustration of people not finishing their shit before submitting it, but you got so close to actually breaking out into a pretty damn good song that I'm a little more frustrated with you for not completing this. It spent all that time building up and never burst out the top. A bit disappointing, and way too short.
the intro is pretty dang boring man.
you should aslo add some reverb to your melodies.
(if you haven't already)
Very true, I just wanted to keep it simple and believable. Thanks anyway.
good i liked it
Heh, Thank you =)