The drumming in the beggining sounds a bit like one of my songs called dark introduction. The melody is nice. I think you should have added more nstruments, though, to make the variety better. Overall, a good kind-of-begginer song.
It was a pretty cool song. the drum beat was pretty nice though alittle reverb could help the song out. The synth/string sounded real good. So far so good, keep at it and i hope to see more.
This song is pretty good considering you're "still new at it". I really like that sort of synth string thing that starts at 11 seconds into the song. I think you should speed up the echo thing that happens at around 4 seconds, because it gets out of sync with the drums. Also, that's a pretty strainge quote in the middle of there.
you're right, that echo noise is out of sync.. need to fix that.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.