It was decent, and it sounded pretty good. I liked the synths you used, but I was expecting a hard beat or harmony to come in, but it never did. You can't just have little small synths here and there, you need big ones. THe one at 109 didn't cut it either. If you need any ideas, check out some of my songs. You can review if you want, but I only reviewed one of yours.
Here's what I think
Too much going on in the bass = not so good.
Choir preset doesn't work.
High end blips are annoying.
Progression needs to be mixed up a bit more, otherwise you need to make it more catchy. Melody around 2 mins is dissonant.
This song is weird, all those clashes of instruments and pitch, were they purposeful. If so, then it's kinda good, not really memorable. If not, then you've got a lot of work to do before this song becomes decent.
Well the musical idea I was going for is the slow confusion of messing around with LSD, so the opposite instruments and pitch were on purpose as I thought they added to it, giving it that confused, odd, and yet still in motion feeling.