So fucking true... You the realest rapper on this site Kellz.
This is fuckin IT!
I love the beginning and I love your lyrics, you have an amazing flow.
The beat is maddd cool and the background loop is sick!
Kinda dig it, kinda don't
I actually like the background beat (sounds like something from an NES game), I think the vocal flow is pretty good and natural, but the lyrics leave a little to be desired. It starts out pretty good, and the chorus is really sweet, but some of the lyrics actually seem very stereotypical to me (like talking a lot about how great your rap is), and a couple of the offensive similes weren't really necessary. I'm not a huge fan of homophobic lines in rap, so the line in your second verse knocked a couple points off from me.
I respect the beats (although it was a little uber-repetitive) and you definitely have a very nice flow, but I personally was turned off by a good deal of the lyrics, especially after the first verse.
5 - Worth a listen
Anti-rapper rap? One word: Awesome.
yo kellz, we gotta fuck up this brotha below us
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.