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Dream Delirium

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Alright, this one's easy to figure out.

"Dream Delirium

To seize upon a chance
to dust off a faded memory

Through the cricket rows
of chirping clatter

A buzzing warmth
outside the golden glory
A hazy damp weight
This pleasant insanity
Sweet dream delirium

Every step
a task
through this tranquil cloud

Half past the mast
and slowly draining

So distant

and forgotten."

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Great!

A nice piece of voice acting! Great poem recital. Good voice quality and decent emotional input too. Hope you get a few voice actings jobs, keep it up!

-cd-

apzfreak responds:

Thanks! That's certainly one job I wanna do, hopefully I'll get that chance someday!

AMAZING

very well done i really enjoy your poetry... keep it up... and i believe that you could go somewhere. the melody was ok hence the fact its not a 10 it needs to be catchy and addicting
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apzfreak responds:

Yeah it's a kinda drawn out longing sort of sound. I was frustrated when I recorded it, so I couldn't tap into what that guitar riff should feel like completely. I tried several other riffs of mine, but none of them matched what the poem was about. Which is a hazy recollection of a field of wheat out in the valley when it's humid as hell.

Not really my taste, but not bad.

Sounds like your either telling a story or chanting lyrics to a song. Perhaps even a poem? Add a beat or something, you know like a more traditional type of music.

) Responses Are Greatly Appreciated : )
apzfreak responds:

Well it's a poem I wrote, so yeah! It's a poem! =) Actually, this is the kind of input I need to hear, Thanks! When I wrote the poem, it's all about the concept and feel. When I recorded it, the main think I focused on was the delivery, very little else. I'll take this into consideration with future submissions. Thanks!

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apzfreak
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Uploaded
Jan 20, 2008
2:46 AM EST
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32 sec

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