apps is right, 0:35 sounds good.
but.. the key shifts kinda through it off..
but not bad. only thing i suggest is find better notes for the shifts.
and maybe (possibly) make the bass a little less wubby.. lol. but its gd.
and you might also consider having a new melody fade in at your break,
so that when the beat picks up again its something new.
0:35 to like 0:45 has a sick beat if you work on it more would be pretty good
Thanks again, i'm working on another song right now (yer i do multiple songs at a time lol)
I think you should work with it a little more but it works. Its not bad at all! Its got some pretty good sounds to it and the rythem is pretty cool! Don't give up on this track it could be made to shine!
Yer thanks man, i'm nowhere near finished and am actually working in collaboration with another guy (with 9 years experience =]) so yer, it should turn out alright. Thanks for your review =].
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.