For a first try not bad then again i wouldnt know right LOL. i hope to see more of ya kid.<(^_^)>
STFU you suck at life and newgrounds and Halo 3. lol jk
to be honest, it doesn't loop that well, & the sound is kinda noisy :P
But thats how it all starts man! Trial & error
Keep experimenting with sounds untill u find the proper one.
For example, i submit songs in hip hop, trance, techno, classical, ambient & so...
Because i wanna know which genre i'm best at, & its nice not to keep thing in a specific routine.
Have fun with it! :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.