Dude...
This needs more, much more, to be truly enjoyable. The beat would sound better if there were more than some hard-to-hear vocals behind it. Add some instrumentals and cut down on the vocals, turn what you do have up, and clean it up a bit.
If you don't like gabber or otherwise, tracks with distorted and prolonged beats... listen no more! If you do, vote 5! =D
Here is just a taster in what I have got in store! ;)
Once I have got Cubase (if I ever get it lol) and I make the full track of this, it will totally blow your fucking socks off!!
Tell me what improvements I can make. Obviously adding some hats and synths would help. Lol!
Dude...
This needs more, much more, to be truly enjoyable. The beat would sound better if there were more than some hard-to-hear vocals behind it. Add some instrumentals and cut down on the vocals, turn what you do have up, and clean it up a bit.
<What the last review responce said>
Hmm
I dont like this at all, I don't really understand why this is music. I love Fight Club and everything...,maybe it's just me, but I really don't think this qualifies as a music track or really a track at all. The beat that has been put over the top of it is as annoying as somebody bellowing in my ear. This is my opinion, please don't take it personally.
I realise that this track sounds a bit... no, wait... totally shit right now!
I got some stuff to put into this and a lot to work on with it. This is just my first version of what is to come.
Great potential
First of all: Fight Club is teh shiz
a) lower the volume of the heavy beat
b) up the volume of Tyler Durden
c) 9 seconds in: remove the scream
1. Fuck yehz!!!
2 & 3. I will balance them out
4. Can do for the first one i think, but the following quieter and fading screams are overlayed with Tyler.
I will make it better, I promises!! =)
not sure.
the vocals are cool and keep your attention off the very repetitive beat in the background but it kinda gets annoying after a while of listening to it..Other then the annoying repetitive beat after the voice clips are done its not that bad. I can see this used in some flashes.
Wyldfyre1
I do suppose that beat after the vocals does need a bit more diversity. I can't really get rid of its repetitiveness completely as that is what gabber involves, but i can put some filtering and synths in it to make it a lot better and more balanced.
Thanks for the pointers.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.