I find this quite interesting, good for something i know that. :)
I like it!
Sounds like it's too empty
Well to start off the clash that you use for a snare doesn't really fit in the atmosphere you're trying to create with this song.
The vocals are used good, they fit well and they're not repetitive, good job!
Bass is good, could've been abit louder, just a small bit. But your main problem is the lack of variation I think, which makes your bass sound abit dull in the end, try experimenting with cutoff frequencies to alternate your bass sound.
I'm missing some pads, like the one you used at the start aswell as some random sounds that would just fill up the song abit, and give a finishing touch.
Overall it's a good song with potential, you got some work though :)
Also, I noticed a big influence of Omen - Rise (N-Type remix) , if you don't know it, check it out i'm sure you'll like it ;-)
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I fucking hate slower dubstep but whatever, I'll drop this shit a review anyway.
Good intro, adds to the dark and evil feel.
Good intro effects.
- Adds to the feel.
Good intro drums.
- Like the delay and BGish feel of them, adds to the feel.
Good intro strings and pads.
- Also adds to the feel.
Main beat is way too fucking repetitive, jesus fucking monkey balls.
I like that wobbly bass and loud ass sub-bass, they go good together.
- The fills and stubbs are good too.
The punchy drums are ok but ehh, I ain't feelin em too much.
- They need to be louder or have some fills or something.
Nice soft vocals in the BG also, add to the spookiness.
Basses, bass stubbs and fills.
Intro pads, strings, soft delayed BG drums and vocals.
Loud ass sub bass.
Like that drum effect thats like a gun shot, makes it fucking heavy.
Composition, needs some more shit too it, its too reptitive.
Mixing, needs work, everything could fuse better.
Mastering, sound could be smoother.
This was a quick review but in short this is decent but could be a lot better.
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SSP - Sam.
i love it great bass indeed
keep up the good work !!
Nice tune... but a little repetitive.
This is a heavy tune, but it seems to be a little minimal, even for dubstep. I reckon even the slightest little touch of reverberated melody over the top could give it the variation it needs.
Good work though, always nice to hear some fresh sounds.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.