Well it's a good track, but all it is is basicly a mix of different beats, and not in many different tones either, just lots of temposhifts without many additional instruments. It does start getting better at :40, but it needs more additions, keep it going!
Hardcore? Or fucking annoying?
Ugh, oh my god. I just want it to end. Sorry, but this is absolutley one of the worst uses of FL drumpacks that a person can use. The beat was annoying and loud.
I don't believe your song had much motivation, or was going anywhere, more like going random directions. and the hitting headfirst into a wall because it thought it saw a squirrel or something.
Advice, don't use FL drums, use soundfont drums or DOWNLOAD a VST.