Pretty interesting song.
It has a few things going on at once. But, not enough. This is your first song, so i guess I can't hold that against you.
It's a pretty decent song. Keep up the great work
PS: Check out my latest song "Mess Around"
i encourage you to keep working trance, you have the potential !
The sound is kinda low but it's good enough to get a 5/5 8/10 in my book