ORALE ESTA CHINGON WEY.
The instrumental is a bit weak and could have been much more complementary to the well-written lyrics. The lyrics were delivered well and actually say something. You have slightly renewed my hope in rap.
I dig this :)
Especially liked the lyrics and the way they are delivered. Perhaps the vocals are just a bit too forward in the mix (especially when you consider how awesome the melody of the song is), but that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work. :)
man u might wana blow ya nose before u record ya rappin. haha no jus playin man, jus sounds a lil blocked nose-ish, kno wut im sayin. jus gotta work on gettin ya words clear n all that, but otherwise its pretty nice. keep it real~
I did have a clear nose when I did this. xD
I tried to keep a steady voice, but all the takes I took, I kept gettin emotional. This shit hits a sensitive subject. This is like my 3rd time recording this song, and this one is by far the clearest. Thanks for ya input.
beat is crazy..lyrics are crazy..but ur flow gotta be fixed up...u go quik sumtimes ...slow others..overall good shyt
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.