Liked it. great job.
Nice and simple, and smooth progressive music all the way through. Sounds mysterious and tense, in the beginning at least, heh, then it all changes. Good rythem though, keep it up!
sounds really good, kinda sounds like at was all the instrument, but it is obvious you mixed it, it is nice, but when you cut it out for a bit, instead, it should come in with a different pattern, then fade out later and have the other thing
also, the intro is too irrelivant to the song, sometimes you just gotta take things out if they dont work
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I like the song alot. My comment however, is that this song appears to be inable to stay on 1 melody, Making it hard to really get into. Try bringing the music into a silence between the entrance and the harder, faster part, and add some softer instruments to the entrance. Also, if you could make it just a *little* more repeditave, to allow for the beat to sink in, i think it could help a ton.
Dont get me wrong, still a 5. Just some ideas. :)
I totally know what you mean. it needs to stick with the synths more before switch to a different one. also i found the melody to be a bit incomplete sounding, thats why i redid it on piano. just looking to see if its even worth working on, so i submitted to get opinions.
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