first and last attempt

owh owh TO fast for goa bassline.
there dont seem to be a rythm, melody or anything to call this 'music'.

it's really really bad and boring

Eh....

New stuff
I have heard all the synths in so many songs - don't get me wrong - but every song has that beginning synth
the bass work too - it's annoying - it's not really constant
---- i've heard all this stuff before
and what ever comes in at 2:23 just threw me off and at 2:47 is not right
this is the same old same old stuff
-- heard over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again
boring
I know that you can do better
some of your others songs are pretty good

Not so good...

This doesn't sound anything like the Goa trance I've listened to -- it's more like a jumble of random sounds. While I would explain what Goa trance is really like, people at Wikipedia did a much better job, so check out Wikipedia if you want to know more about what methods you should be practicing. You can also check out what they have to say about psytrance if you're interested.

A lot of work to be done if you want to do better with Goa or psychadelic trance.

Meep

I agree with the other guy, nice for ur first try, and 2:45 was just... unexplainable lol, but its good to try new things. jia you

A few problems

I think that lead you have would be nice for the minute or so intro, but I think it just sounds a little too quiet throughout the song. And personally, I think there are just way too many reverse crashes in here. It's one of the weakest transitions in the world, and didn't sound that great (or maybe I'm just using FL too much while I'm writing this). And that really high sounding synth thing that came in once in a while was kinda cool, exept I think you used that a little too much too. Using it too much just hurts my ears a bit :(

On the other hand, I think you have a good beat going here. Whatever happened at 2:45 was really messed up, and not in a good way. Makes me think of dblue_glitch, and shouldn't really be used a lot in anything other than the hardcore end of things (unless you really know what your doing with it.) And that snare that comes in at the end sounds off. But overall I think this was a decent attempt at Goa, but maybe add a bit more reverb or something. First time I heard them I thought they sounded a little off.