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Jan 13, 2008 | 12:14 AM EST
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2.3 MB
1 min 40 sec
3.42 / 5.00

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For thw same failed RPG. It's of the same nature as Polarity, but not quite the same in terms of instrumentation nor in terms of... general sound.

Please, if you're reading this/listening to this piece, write a review. Just a brief one. One describing what this piece, or my work in general, needs. I love critique. I need it. I must have it.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

So you like critique, eh?

Well this mix was pretty cool, despite the fact that it was sorta short and didn't go anywhere. You're most likely going to lose points on sound quality and on the lack of ending.

And there's no bass! Bass is really what holds a song together, mate.

You should work on your mixing skills, add some stuff to this and then resubmit later, because at its core it really isn't too bad.

Rated 4 for potential :]

DeusExMagna responds:

Wait, a loop isn't supposed to end, though! Or are you using the term "ending" loosely here?

Anyway, thanks for the critique. I admit, the absence of a bass track doesn't really bother me, but I might retool it at a later date with a bass track to see just what kind of difference it makes.

As for sound quality, are you saying my work's lo-fi, or that certain aspects are a tad muddy? I'm assuming it's the latter, which is, indeed, truth. That can be fixed simply enough.

Thanks again. I'll come back to this sooner or later and fix 'er up for sure.