Well met, Daniel old friend. Your work is coming together nicely. All you need to do now is balance your bass out and throw in a few more variations on melody. You're off to a great start!
Thanks. Your always there to encourage me.
I'll see what I can do. Perhaps We'll talk later on that matter.
Has a reat beat and some nice bass to it. But you used the same rythm repeatedly, which is bad 9 times out of 10.
I see what you mean. I'm still trying to get into the whole idea of original work.
It's not a fast process.
I'll keep what you said in mind though. Thanks.