Around 3:20, the first cohesive idea came together in your solo, almost created a bit of a theme for the solo. If you hear Dex or Benny Maupin blow on this, you'll notice they do take a thematic approach, so that something positive to look at. Nice attempt, and I hope to hear more from you in the future.
Never heard of the watermelon man, heh, but this is a funky melody. Insteresting choice of instruments and a real jazzy tune too, love it, keep up the great work!
Good groove and good music. backgroundsounds lack quality but that's undone by the sax!
you play very good!
since when do you play your instrument?
like your remake.. you did it very well!
ive played for about 3 years
good use of tempo try to use different dynamics
yeah the mic doesnt show dynamics well