Parts of this remind me of Godflesh, one of all-time favorite bands. Have you heard them? The distortion on the drumbeat is nice and crunchy, it's too bad the guitar and the beat are competing for the same audio space. That little blast of noise was a nice touch also. I don't know what the other reviewer was talking about when s/he said "really repetitive power chords," s/he is probably not a guitarist. If anything my biggest criticism is that the structure is too loose. Pick just a couple of the best riffs from this and rerecord it and you could have a fucking masterpiece.
Thanks a lot.
I've actually never heard of Godflesh, but I'll look them up.
Good advice. I appreciate any criticism I can get.
Thanks for taking the time to rate/review.
it was pretty good. I'm not a fan of really repetitive power chords... Beat was OK, but it lacked coherencey, I would have liked it to have a consistent theme and an actual chord progression that goes somewhere...
That makes sense.
It's not really a brilliant work of art or anything. Just something I did with no clear goal to achieve. I just but up the beat and played along to it.
Thanks for taking the time to listen and review.