hey man, just noticed this!

you have some cool use of percussion in here. the 808 kick would fit into the mix better if it were a little bit turned down. the distorted leads sound interesting, good note choices.

keep going!

5/5 stars if this is your first time. (I know I marked it with a 3.5)

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[edit after your reply dude!] no worries man!!!! don't think of yourself as a slow learner, this is not easy stuff to learn. just keep working, and if people hate on you for wanting to do this then just ignore them and remember you're gonna make it someday! it only takes work, work, work. me, f-777, paragonx9, dagrahamcracka, kr1z....all of us started where you are. you'll get there. keep going!!!