This is kind of a relaxing song. Maybe the drums could be turned down a little. Overall is great.
Sounds great so far, nice pianoplay and a good beat. Lots of variation with the piano too. Starts of great, but it doesn't really seem like it gets anywhere after that. Maybe an additional layer with a little faster escalating higher pianoplay would be a nice addition in certain places, also a little varying beats, and definatly more length. Might be nice with a little artificial sound too, nothing vg-ish, but more of an ambient soundwave to accompany the whole thing. Very musical, sounds both happy and dramatical, heh. Looking forward to the real thing!