A nice tune. Would be even better with a heavy beat to accomapny it in the background, but other than that it's all great, keep it going!
A good start
I agree with Soundgasm - the song has a lot of potential, as the melody is cool and could expand into a lot more. I personally think the song would benefit a lot from a solid, moving beat underneath it all, rather than the rhythm it's got now.
As a whole, the song just needs to get fleshed out a bit and it should be great!
If you ever get a free moment, please check out my song - thanks!
Needs more layering
The song has potential. I like the tune, but it needs a lot more layering.
Thanks for the feedback, your suggestions have been noted