A good start here this was notbad, there could be some points to improve but i will touch on that later, its stuff like this that remind me hoe interesting the audio portal is. Slow beat here but has a little something here, i like how this gives off a scary and deep feeling kind of like you are in a haunted house or something, ireally like the quality, i wouldnt mind some more mixture in there but with some more of the same what you got going on, anyways nice job here. And now here comes the end, not really but the end of this review for sure, anyways you have a good track here, i wouldnt mind a little more stuff in there but in the end i was pleased, so nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright so that brings us to this little area where we can sit doen and try and improve on things, you have a really good piece but maybe a few of this and that and some of that will make up for some small changes and overall better end results so try some things out. As for this one, Make it longer, maybe add some other mixture of sounds so its different yet not lol,
its a cool track but like the guy before me said... needs refinement.
i can see u put alot of effort since thurs quite a wide variety of instruments and patterns and the song length is over 3 min... but the thing is when ur makin a diverse song like this it still has to flow so it feels like the same song throughout.
and unfortunately some of the combinations of patterns dont harmonize as well as they could.
next time maybe u should try coming up with a really catchy main melody and kinda just build on it.
neways keep at it. 3.26 / 5.00 (+ 0.32).
u got my support ^_^
The quality is decent however the tune itself feel very copy paste carries the melody as if you didn't know what tune it was going to carry before you did placed the notes in semi-randomly. The background tune when combined with a lot of the other melodies you try to loop over each other... just don't work.
I suggest gathering together the key elements of your song and making them the destinct overtones and tunes to the song and to build from those rather than keeping one background going while throwing notes around to see if they stick.
nice hiphop beat. i really liked it good job. 9/10 4/5
btw checkout my HipHop tracks, im sure u'll like'em.
i digg it
Wow this is great for hip hop.
I didnt know hip hop could sound so awesome and soft.