this deserves a ten and it is my new favorite as of 5:53 central standard time
this is my first login in about a year...just to review this song. i lurk around in the audio portal looking for anything interesting, and i stumble upon this. being a musician myself, i really really appreciate your voice, and dont want to dictate anything about your music, but if you added a simple drum part, it could be so much closer to "radio ready". but as it is, I love it. where I live there are no talented musicians to play with, and I wish to play with someone as talented as yourself.
Hey! Thanks for the review and Welcome Back to the Login world of NG ;)
I totally agree with you regarding the drum part - it would certainly make the song more "radio ready" . Do you know anyone with a kit? :)
I'm glad that you like the piece without the drums too though - simplistic piano/vocal songs are always fun to make.
I love the sound of the piano in combination with your voice. The piano has many dramatic lower notes drawing attention to just the right areas and the echoing of parts of the lyrics are a nice touch. I think the areas it's most dramatic is the line "They turned against my wrath as Goddess" and I like how it contrasts with the quiet, careful areas such as the first few lines of the first stanza and for "Realizing / I am not free / I am not free" Another thing I like is the inflections and the alteration of speed when you sing the lines "I was murdered and put on this Earth I made" and "Each time I cry it rains for me" I keep coming back to listen to your piano pieces too :) Great job and I hope you keep putting out more wonderful work for us to listen to!
Everytime I listen to this I am inspired to write more of a Storm Goddess shorts series I am working on for fun. The voice of this goddess sounds a lot like her and it tells some of her story before and at the start of the pieces. Each time she cries it rains but it also rains/storms when she's angry.
If you'd like to read them I'd be honored. They're pretty short works. Most don't go over 500 words. The pieces are on deviantArt: http://amarainsevi.deviantart.com/art /storm-goddess-204254498?
why are you wasting time here on new grounds i bet you could take the world by storm
You have such an amazing voice! keep making more, you're too good!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.