Quite simplistic, quite good.
You should make a full version, the drum is a bit too simplistic for my liking.
Please listen to my song called please
Thats very short, and why nirvana, that sux, nirvana with trance hah.
Make full version please.
for your fourth submission this is not to bad, although the loop was poorly made and the beat is highly unoriginal, I will reframe from blaming. Keep it up your not far from really good music.