Вполне съедобно. Нет басов и чётко выраженной главной мелодии. Сведение приличное, но пока что такое себе. Тебе придётся неслабо так постараться, чтобы заслужить моё доверие снова. Причём не только заслужить, но и ещё не потерять его. Пока что ставлю 6/10.

At first I thought that this track would be in the Dance genre and sound slightly different than TranceWay, but as I understood from the sound, it is built on the basis of the previous one, only with changed melodies. It doesn't sound very diverse, but it's not so bad either. 8/10

The Prototype

No bass, a lot of repetition, mastering is poor but bearable. At 2:31 not particularly appropriate breaking moment, but still interesting. If the instruments were changed to more thematic (dark), but I could give you a +. Otherwise it'll do, 7/10. It made me smile, to say the least.

Басса нету, много повторяется, сводка храмает но терпимо. На 2:31 не особо подходящий разнос, но всё же интересный. Если бы инструменты поменялись на более тематические (темные), но я бы мог влепить +. А так сойдет, 7/10. Я скажем, немного улыбнулся.

Hi-NRG Trance Nice. I could suggest that here you could've dropped the main lead arm chords to have some variation. It sounds very repetitive here, and the arp continues throughout the piece. One thing that helps is to picture yourself making lyrics for a song to help know when to add verses/back off on the hype/energy and/or differentiate the riff from the chorus. Around 2:40 I see theres some shift in melodic flow, though its all understanding arrangement phychology. :) Keep it up though. I'll be keeping an eye on your work.