The "out of tune" bass combined with the fast piano give it a horror/thriller atmosphere. And it's loopable as well.
you invented a good melody and a good counter melody towrds the end. alot can happen with this song that i feel you didnt bring out its full potential but it was good nevertheless. im not sure if the chords you were using were necessarily right for the song and the fast paced piano could have used more support from something like the bass to go along with it. good job and keep it coming.
Nice piano, strings worked nice and subtly.
Good job all around, though I think the melody was a little out of wack, and the bass was off tonewise.
I didn't like the very high fast part on piano. Good job though.
Please listen to one of my songs.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.