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Rose Mirror - Lunziestella

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Yes this is a weird one, I’m experimenting for the most part but I think this came ok, I can’t really judge if the bass is too loud since my headphones are strange but on my phone it sounded ok, but feedback is appreciated, done for a contest and my game c:


UPDATE: Fixed a lot of piercing and mixing issues!

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This is quite a unique song. Good job Stella

I like the eerie atmosphere at the beginning, but some of the tinny synths in the treble range sound a bit harsh in my headphones. You might consider taking some of the treble off of them, or at the very least softening the echo effects. The grating atmospheric details and dreamy harmonies blend quite nicely together here, and the drum patterns are quite creative too. The dissonance at :53 seems fitting too, and the modulations at 1:06 really doubles down on the experimental texture. I think at some point the composition needed a stronger sense of direction about it, though. There are a lot of creative ideas here that I would’ve liked to see you flesh out more, but - much like a ghost that can walk through walls - this piece doesn’t seem to know which room it wants to be in. I’m really torn about this piece overall. You’re getting top marks for originality, sound design, and atmosphere, but the mixing could be a tad more polished, and the composition seems a bit choppy and jarring at times. If you ever revisit this piece, though, send me a PM. It has a lot of potential. Keep at it, Lunziestella! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
7.75/10

I think this is pretty good!

to be honest this has some nice unique atmosphere, aslo i like how the beats sound unique, drum n bass kinda? love the work btw, i would say it really stands out! :)

Wow, that's actually good song! Keep it up!

Lunziestella responds:

Thank youu

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Votes
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Score
4.28 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 16, 2022
2:56 PM EDT
Genre
Video Game
File Info
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2.6 MB
1 min 53 sec

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