Nice melodic Riddim 👌
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Nice melodic Riddim 👌
I like the tranquil mood at the beginning and the quirky pads. The crisp beats and strings at :14 were nice touches, too. The brighter tone at :50 is cool, and I like the sharper percussion at 1:02 as well. The piece is a bit slow to progress at times, and is kind of lacking in harmonic depth and melodic content. The bridge with the flashy string lines was a good idea, though, and I appreciate the variations on the breaks the second time around at 2:41. The arrangement here is a bit choppy, with a lot of stop-start transitions and sudden additions of instruments. It might be nice to find more ways of creating dynamism within the phrases - automation, variations on the main riffs, etc. I also thought the outro was a tad bland. The production quality here is really good - perhaps a bit over-compressed, but your volume levels are still under control. The sound design and mood of the piece are probably my favorite elements of it, but you also did a good job with the rhythmic content, mastering, and atmosphere. Keep at it, Jekoer! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
7.5/10
I really appreciate that you took the time to give an opinion of my song.
Despite not being selected for the final round, I am happy to be considered for this and allow myself to create something for you.
Thanks a lot! I hope to see us next year.
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