Well, the riffings/leads aren't bad, they remind me a little of As I Lay Dying or Killswitch Engage. Though, your sound is weak. It's very static and the track is full of clips. Guess this one is just a preview for a song you are making?
Good so far I say, just needs a bit more work. ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.