Woo, nice track. The guitar is good and the text is good. Sound quality is a bit crappy though and the voice is pretty low, but otherwise it's a great song. looking forward to more of your stuff! keep it up!
Could be better.
It doesn't matter how good this song is. People will bash it simply because of your recording technique.
If you can get a good, clear recording of it, you'll get some better feedback.
I simply can't judge it farily as it is. I can barely hear most of it.
here we go!
Probably should get yourself some multi track audio programs so you can work on your vocals and such.. Wich brings me to that.. You need to put more volume in your voice. You have a half way decent voice may as well sing and not mumble right? (not insulting pls don't take it as such). Keep on it! I expect to hear some great stuff from ya.