Well it sounds great so far, nice and simple. Good rythem, good guitarplay, a nice little tune. Looking forward to the finished version of it, keep up the great work!
Wonderful work here.. I'd say add that piano it may just work out for you! This is a pretty great song here.
i USED to take guitar lessons. then i took drum lessons, then i gave up and decided it wasnt what i wanted to do. it looks like you got pretty far, keep going, go join a band or something. youve got talent.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.