ok ok short but snappy to less taste put more feel in it
Paradox in time...
Well seeing as how IM still in 2007, ill write my very last 07 review
so lets break this song piece by piece
0:0 to 0:20
excellent guitar/guitar rhythm, very nicely done
0:20 to 1:00
excellent transition, nice fat sounds again, only thing is the seconds b4 the minute its a little akward to listen to, heres why
its out of tune with the initial melody
1:00 to end
probably my least favorite of the song, didnt need the break with the out of tune guitar, the end seems rushed, nothing as good as the beginning, sounds like some sounds just got thrown in
excellent guitar playing, nice transition at :30, loved the fat sounds of the bass and synth, personally i live for scratch fills, original bassline: everything basically, couldave been without the weird guitar break, after the delayed bass, sounds rushed
i give it a 9/5 9 for some rushing and guitar break
overall : excellent job!
I completely agree with you, even on the negative points. Even though it was submitted last, this was actually the first song I made. It really began as just a test run, but eventually i got it up to a level that I thought was acceptable for NG. Not really my best though. Thanks.