i can give you some pointers
for the most part this was a hot track but ive learned from experience that making someone like your song including the lyrics its not all about making it rhyme its really all about telling a story about your life or your fellings about someone or something like if you were stabbed by a rival gangsta tell them what you was doin and then he seen you you started runnin to your hood for protection and he got you and you almost died and you seen your family but something kept you back from dying and you know what im trynna say even if you have to make it up do it it will grab the viewers attention ive been in the game for 8 years not famous dont want to be but if you need some lyrics plz let me know ill email them to you in a day or less beats too i can make some hot shit for you to keep it up kid you doin ya thing dont listen to no one and never let them put you down and youll defenitly go places
That's cool and all, but I didn't write or perform the actual lyrics. Thanks for the review, though.
this one should win
Aw, thanks, man! I appreciate it!