Nice job mate, good mastering, concept and it's unique. I found it to get a bit boring at some parts but that's all I can poke at it. Good job :).
really good for an attempt
I def. don't think this is as bad as you say it is, although missing a real melody or tune, its really great for an ambient/dnb track
9/5 just forsome missing high-parts
wow thanks lol.