It looks like this might be a real hit if you put a little work in it, I know it's not done yet but so far it sounds realy good. And as kr said, I think it needs a good baseline. Keep up the good work :D
a potential hit!
Heres the feedback!!!!! :)
Nice intro! cool instrument ^^
Cool & relaxing instrument that sounds like some kind of bell too..!
And a cool trance lead in it too :D
Drums are ok, but should be a litl louder and more pumping :)
Try adding an instrument that does a bassline, ur song will sound better cuz its more filled up and ur main melody will sound better too :)
Keep it up!
Mind checking my latest song? ^^
This isnt really the final version but more of a quick snip
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.