A few things....
1) Nice as opening!!! Brilliant!!!
2) The bass you spoke of is nice.... excellent job on that!
3) The problem is that you have way to much emtiness throughout the song. You need a better drum pattern and trance-ish melodies or sounds to cover up all the wholes....
But still it's nice! Great work!
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