The melody, if you can call it that, was horrible. And it just kept repeating from :35 to 1:42. How this song has a 4.83 is beyond comprehension...
well my friend maybe you don't like it, but some people do and i understand that there are some bad pieces in this song, but the focus was on the sound clips not the song, so try to understand that. i am getting better at this so don't down out a newb too much.
Synths are pretty simple unedited sytrus presets but the sound clips and everything fits together very nice.
To improve you can...
1. Edit the synths differently
2. Add a deeper bass
3. Make the sound clip a little quieter
thanks, it really took me awhile to do this but i'm glad to hear some good response from people. thanks for the review and next time i make song like this, i'll take your advice.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.