I think what Zareox7 was missing was a clap or snare during the technoish part of the song. Either way the piano was wonderful, very nice job.
i didn't care for the transitions much, but consult with some other artists, dj-n maybe, and talk to him about your transitions. this is a very good song, and working with him to improve youyr songs could make your bright future here on Newgrounds an even brighter one. Merey Christmas!
It was good, but...
I liked it quite a bit, but when it got into the techno part a bit, I felt it was missing something, sorta like a climax in a story. Good job though.
Well u need to work a bit on the transitions & the ending.
But u did a great job 4 an hour.
Take ur Time next Time!