v good

hi mate how you these days
i fink its qutie a bare tune
mind checking ma submissions

_Jism_

nice

its a good beat, but you've got to A) get some better samples B) only use white notes on the piano roll (some notes sound off-key)

RESPECT

that was good keep it up!

None shabby :)

Not too bad at all! I like the cut-in at 0:21.

While I'm not a huge personal fan of the vox you use for your melody line (it's too crunchy for my tastes), it comes together pretty nicely. I feel that the main line after 1:06 could use a little more definition and variety (maybe toss in a hoover or piano line above the rhythm.)

One of the things I found to be really jarring was the huge break from 0:57-1:00:05. Unless there's a particular effect you're looking for, try to keep breaks of silence limited to 1 measure or less (the break I mention is ~2 measures long.)

By and large I'd say this piece has some potential. All it needs to make it great it some direction and variety :)

Gj!

cool

not to bad... :)