hi mate how you these days
i fink its qutie a bare tune
mind checking ma submissions
its a good beat, but you've got to A) get some better samples B) only use white notes on the piano roll (some notes sound off-key)
that was good keep it up!
None shabby :)
Not too bad at all! I like the cut-in at 0:21.
While I'm not a huge personal fan of the vox you use for your melody line (it's too crunchy for my tastes), it comes together pretty nicely. I feel that the main line after 1:06 could use a little more definition and variety (maybe toss in a hoover or piano line above the rhythm.)
One of the things I found to be really jarring was the huge break from 0:57-1:00:05. Unless there's a particular effect you're looking for, try to keep breaks of silence limited to 1 measure or less (the break I mention is ~2 measures long.)
By and large I'd say this piece has some potential. All it needs to make it great it some direction and variety :)
lol yeah im struggling to find some decentish stuf to use as effects... thnks for the comments and all that... ill take what you've said and try to learn from it
not to bad... :)