Pretty good bro, keep it up mane!
good job, i like how you use words unlike most of the hip hop.
My first question is... why? Why do this to music? I'm not sure how long you've been doin' this but maybe, just maybe, you should find a different profession and/or a different style of music at least. The beat wasn't really... "horrible" per se, but it was one of the most repetetive beats I've ever forced my ears to listen to. The "rapping", or whatever that was supposed to be, honestly wasn't the worst I've heard, the chorus, however, was really off tune and made my ears bleed... just a little, don't worry. The concept of the song was one of the dumbest I've ever heard of and didn't even bring it forward in a pressing or even humorous way. I guess all I can say is, keep at it. Hopefully you'll get better. The only reason I gave you a "1" was because you at least put forth some time from your life to make a song that you, obviously, are proud of, due to the fact that you've uploaded it to the public. If this review, to you, was from the perspective of an "ass" I apologize, I'm just trying to let you know what I, personally, think was wrong with this song. Just work harder and focus on your vocals, you're not that bad at actually "rapping" and you have potential. Just keep at it.
~Dylan Glow ^_^
you do know this is a rip off of 50 cents "im gonna die tonite"?