how could i refuse
the bass wasnt low enough in the mix, Im on headphones and I could still pick it out. I think your using an acid bass synth, turn the gain on its low shelf up. Your right, this does take a lot of turns haha. The melody at 1:50 was a bit off, there was some dissonance in the chord and accompianment. You did a nice job with the transitions, they built nicely, well see how this end goes...
Head is throbbing, but im not dancing. Needs more playful background synths and not the plucked lead that overrides at the end. Very interesting piece of work, keep at it!
DJSubstanc3 
