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Dec 24, 2007 | 12:25 PM EST
File Info
2 MB
2 min 10 sec
4.25 / 5.00

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Rated 4.25 / 5 stars
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565 Plays | 96 Downloads
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Author Comments

Shuuiondo Reibu=Ambient Rave(Japenese)

If you think something is WRONG with it please say so, this way i may be able to fix and or edit it.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Saddenning; some parts needs some work

I really like that melody that you opened with, it has a real sad sound to it and nice FX in the background. Nice mallet percussion, the synth itself just sounds to presetish.

When you use that synth sequence in the song, it comes in way to randomly, and completey disrupts the flow of the track. It doesnt fit too well so I would take that out completely unless you can figure out a way to make it drift in and out more smoothly. I do appreciate your experimental style tho. I would just go straight into the part with the drums and build from there.

The ending was pretty good, connects with the intro, and I like how you ended the song with ambience. Too add dvierstiy, maybe start off with the intro with different lighting/rain FX samples or no FX at all.

So, you've got yourself a nice opening melody to base an entire track around. I would work on this more and experiment with variations both melodically and rhythmically. A bassline and some synth strings would work great in here. You also did a decent job of mixing, the bass kick is powerful but doesnt clip, you can hear everything relatively clearly. Only one problem, those sytrus presets and drum samples will bore most people. At first, its quite diffifcult to make unique instrument/synth sounds-I would experiment with the reverb, chorus, and EQ FX on the mixer at first. This will help increase a more personal touch.

Keep at it man!

Detonation3 responds:

Thanks for the review and like ive said before i was thinking of makeing a ambient at the same time of a rave so i just mixed lol and thats what the name stands for in jappenese(ambient rave).