You DIDN'T make this. Garageband did.
You didn't make this at all. Garage Band did. At best I can hear maybe a very slight variation, like you added a beat and highhat beat to the synth loop they give you. But I'm sure even that you ripped off from Garageband.
I'm not being mean I'm just calling it like it is, and how it is, is you pretty much took two loops from Garageband and slapped them together and took the credit.
it would be way better if it were just a bit longer than 8 seconds and yes it does make pretty cool intro music
Because it's a loop, does it have to be longer. The idea is that it will repeat. By making it short I have saved valuable file size. Thanks for your suggestion any way.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.